Tuesday 28 May 2013

This is my story map about my treasure box with my story written underneath.

My red treasure box is sparkly  with golden people on it.  It sparkles into my eyes but when I tried to open  it, it was locked!!!  Then I looked behind the treasure box and I found the key. I could open the treasure box and inside it, it had caveman rocks.  I liked the rocks.
Luke CF
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3 comments:

  1. heatherbell29 May 2013 at 07:01

    What lovely words you have used to describe your treasure box Luke. I can just imagine the way it sparkled! It sounds really interesting. I wonder what the cave men used their rocks for?

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  2. Unknown29 May 2013 at 15:29

    The box sounds lovely Luke, and how exciting finding cave man rocks, I loved reading about your treasure box.

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  3. Anonymous30 May 2013 at 10:30

    Wow Luke! That's a great story, thanks for writing it.

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