At school we held a cross country and we jumped over the wire fence and over a wooden fence and in to the plantation and we had to go down a steep hill and under the goalpost to the finish line.
Goodness Kaitlyn, I felt tired and hot after reading your story about the cross country! You have used lots of great describing words. If you read your story again, where could you take out the word 'and' to replace with a full stop and capital letter?
Goodness Kaitlyn, I felt tired and hot after reading your story about the cross country! You have used lots of great describing words. If you read your story again, where could you take out the word 'and' to replace with a full stop and capital letter?
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